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Location : Here
Registration date : 2008-10-25

PostSubject: Fast   Sat Nov 01, 2008 12:01 pm

Cut me fast
Make it deep
Make it last
Make it bleed
Shoot me now
Watch me bow
Close my eyes
And say goodbye
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Male Number of posts : 65
Location : At a perfect state of peace
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: Fast   Mon Nov 03, 2008 2:48 pm

Getting better. There was more emotion in this one. Dig deeper.

Three friends go into battle
One is captured,
One flies away,
the one that is left becomes a hero.
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