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Faust
Lord of Altair
Faust


Male Number of posts : 107
Age : 31
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

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PostSubject: Devotion   Devotion Icon_minitimeMon Nov 03, 2008 10:22 pm

My life, before, I cannot see,
It began anew when you joined me.
Behind a shroud, my past it lies,
Covered now by joyous cries.

Your perfect face, your velvet voice,
I'm filled with joy, that I'm your choice.
The feelings I have felt for you,
trounce everything I thought I knew.

My love, my sweet, my future bride,
to hold you tight fills me with pride.
I'll keep you safe with these two arms,
I swear that you'll come to no harm.

For strength, your love, it fills me through,
I'd give my life to protect you.
I'll bring you joy with all my heart,
for all eternity, we shall not part.
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Chaos Poet
Chaos Lord
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Male Number of posts : 193
Location : Hell
Registration date : 2008-10-21

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PostSubject: Re: Devotion   Devotion Icon_minitimeSat Nov 15, 2008 1:25 pm

It seems, in the end, with both got our new beginnings, eh, my friend? Very good write, it tells a tale of a heart cleansed.
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Faust
Lord of Altair
Faust


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Age : 31
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PostSubject: Re: Devotion   Devotion Icon_minitimeSat Nov 15, 2008 5:11 pm

Thank you, my friend. True love can cleanse the deepest stains.
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Anubis
Shadow Lord
Anubis


Male Number of posts : 65
Location : At a perfect state of peace
Registration date : 2008-10-21

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PostSubject: Re: Devotion   Devotion Icon_minitimeSun Nov 16, 2008 3:04 am

Suck it up!!!!! It is a great write but don't get too soft on me.
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