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Chaos Poet
Chaos Lord
Chaos Poet


Male Number of posts : 193
Location : Hell
Registration date : 2008-10-21

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PostSubject: Dancing   Dancing Icon_minitimeFri Oct 24, 2008 6:36 pm

Damned and damned again,
Living a life of controlling sin,
To dance the dance of decisive revision,
I'll need a partner with whom to spin.

So twirl my life and spin my feet,
Make me move like never before,
Take my hand and take my heart,
And move upon this floor.

Shift the world beneath our feet,
Clean my life of what I was,
Take away the burning decay,
And dance this dance just becuase.

Save my soul from myself,
Control my movements with your own,
Keep the music from ever stopping,
So I'll never live my life alone.

I've loved you from the beginning,
But then I was not who I am,
But when this song started playing,
A new life for me had began.

So move with me and dance away,
Until this party ends,
And no matter what should ever happen,
I will never go back to what I was then.

So twirl my life and spin my feet,
Make me move like never before,
Take my hand and take my heart,
And move with me forevermore.


Last edited by Chaos Poet on Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:37 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Faust
Lord of Altair
Faust


Male Number of posts : 107
Age : 31
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing   Dancing Icon_minitimeFri Oct 24, 2008 6:44 pm

Great poem! Lots of feeling.

... though I can't imagine you dancing. razz
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Chaos Poet
Chaos Lord
Chaos Poet


Male Number of posts : 193
Location : Hell
Registration date : 2008-10-21

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing   Dancing Icon_minitimeSat Oct 25, 2008 12:33 pm

It has happened before. And thanks.


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NEX
Echo
NEX


Female Number of posts : 47
Location : Here
Registration date : 2008-10-25

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing   Dancing Icon_minitimeSat Oct 25, 2008 1:43 pm

very good rite..my favorite on the site
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Anubis
Shadow Lord
Anubis


Male Number of posts : 65
Location : At a perfect state of peace
Registration date : 2008-10-21

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing   Dancing Icon_minitimeTue Oct 28, 2008 9:48 am

Just the kind of poem I would expect form you. Keep it up.
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