Number of posts : 65 Location : At a perfect state of peace Registration date : 2008-10-21
Subject: 3 Part poem Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:07 am
Prelude- Still Human
A warrior stalks through the night Longing for a formitable fight The fighting spirit burning red Countless enimes now lay dead The blade is drawn The time is near Cut his throat From ear to ear Rip his heart From his chest Do it now And pass the test Take his soul The corpse will burn For more death I still will yearn
Now a monster
Eat the flesh Sweetly seared Quench your thirist With fallen tears Hunt them down Let none remain this angered beast You can not tame Grab a victim Hold them tight One more kill Will end this night Hang the meat Out to dry For tomorrow More will die.
Final Thoughts
All it takes is one creature named anger and the world will be consmed.
Chaos Poet Chaos Lord
Number of posts : 193 Location : Hell Registration date : 2008-10-21
Subject: Re: 3 Part poem Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:35 am
So this is what we've all been waiting for?
I say it was worth it, man. You using a rhyme scheme though? Unusual, but I like it. And the meanings there too, score one for Anubis.
Anubis Shadow Lord
Number of posts : 65 Location : At a perfect state of peace Registration date : 2008-10-21
Subject: Re: 3 Part poem Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:23 pm
Thank you. I hope the others agree. If you do like please post a reply and let me know.
Faust Lord of Altair
Number of posts : 107 Age : 31 Location : The Nondemension Registration date : 2008-10-22
Subject: Re: 3 Part poem Tue Oct 06, 2009 6:54 pm
Anubis, this sounds like a recolection on the ANBU training test. I love it! Funny how only you and I passed...
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