*Little Emo*
New Poet
 Number of posts : 1
Age : 29
Location : wv
Registration date : 2008-10-25
 | Subject: Pain  Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:07 pm | |
| I hold my chest
But the pain
Flows through my veins
I clentch my teeth
Trying to hold it back
But the tears do not seize
Happiness stares at me
Laughing in my face
I stare at happiness
But there is no trace | |
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Faust
Lord of Altair
 Number of posts : 107
Age : 31
Location : The Nondemension
Registration date : 2008-10-22
| | Subject: Re: Pain Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:17 pm | |
| Not bad, sis. With some practice, you'll be a great poet.  | |
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Anubis
Shadow Lord
Number of posts : 65
Location : At a perfect state of peace
Registration date : 2008-10-21
| | Subject: Welcome Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:44 am | |
| Not bad. Good use of emotion. Learn to tap into it and utilize all that is around you. | |
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